Thursday, September 10, 2009

please

please make comments on my story, and things that don't make sense. I'd be glad to clarify.

3 comments:

  1. I really like the story and can't wait to read the next installment to find out what happened to the Queen and the Prince.

    Grandpa Len

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  2. What a great start to an exciting story! It certainly held my interest. My imagination kicked in and I could visualize several different scenarios as to where the story would go next.
    It will be fun to see where you take it!

    Grandma Lizzie

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  3. wow joe! that sounds really cool. i love it. it's almost like i'm in the story. i can't wait to find out what happens next.

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